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The preferred version |
After following the feedback from my film poster, I created two improved versions with different font styles and colour intensity.
Afterwards I sought more feedback to see which version was more appealing for our target audience and what could be further improved. I asked two teenagers, both aged 17, who had not seen our film. One had a strong interest in film and the other did not but both agreed that the poster on the left was better.
This is because:
1) The writing is easier to read
2) It appears bolder and draws the viewer in
They enjoyed the blurring of the two scenes together and understood that one was affecting the other, as the two characters do in the film. Also, the tagline was mysterious by directly addressing the viewer and allowing them to connect with serious tone.
To improve, they both suggested that the ripped paper sections, which border the top and bottom of the poster, be straightened rather than 'ripped' so that it would appear more professional.